Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55. Here is mine for this week!
Missing
Gentle Man kind blue eyes wearing a loving broad smile.
Smart appearance, tweed jacket and matching hat.
Interests include his family, home and garden.
Endearing sense of humour and a very generous nature,
Looking after all around him.
Last seen August thirteenth nineteen eighty six
Answers to the name of John Henry Davison, Dad.
The greatest gift I ever received come from God, I call him Dad!
- Anonymous
John Henry Davison came into my life when I was 7. Mum had just got a new job at the prestigious ICI, Wilton Training Centre.
One of the Training officers was John Davison, or Jack as he was known.
Mum was one of the secretaries. This was her first job following the harrowing divorce she had gone through, a visit from the bailiffs to strip the house we lived in, seizing goods to cover my biological father's bankrupted business debts, a nervous breakdown.
Mum borrowed the deposit for a small terraced house from her 2 brothers, Uncle Bob and Uncle Stan. It needed lots doing to it, including total rewiring.
We all know how single women are targeted by unscrupulous workmen,
and back in the 1960's things were no different, so Jack helped Mum by making sure she was not taken for a ride. He also helped where he could, as electrics were his "thing!"
The very first time he came to our house I was introduced to "Uncle Jack!"
Years later I learned he had been more nervous than me! I was playing with my doll's house.
He spent time talking to me and I liked him. He re-wired my doll's house, I had the best there was! Independent switches in each of the rooms, as a real house would.
Over the years a friendship developed and he would visit us every Saturday.
It was quite a treck for him as he did not drive and travelled from just outside Guisborough.
Mum eventually introduced him to her own parents. My Grandad, a man of few words took him out for a walk! He wanted to know his intentions as Mum had been through so much.
Jack assured him he had her and mine best interests at heart. Grandad was re-assured and a great friendship was kindled between them.
Jack liked a flutter on the horses.
He and his brother Frank would visit the races and shadow the big horse trainers.
He noticed they seldom backed their own horses. Jack and Frank would bet the same horses, and win!
Our family always had a flutter on the Grand National. In 1967 we all picked our choices.
The family studied the form, I at 11 looked at the numbers. I figured 100 to 1 sounded good!
Everybody laughed, but I went ahead. Jack took everybody's money and the bets were placed.
Foinavon, my choice won! £50 was a lot of money then! LOL!
My Nana really took a shine to Jack. He would sit with her and talk about this that and the other.
Nana was ill and as her health deteriorated in 1970 we kew she was gravely ill.
On one of his visits as Jack sat with Nana she drew him close and asked him to promise he would look after Madge and Denise....he promised.
On June 17th, 1970, Nana died.
On November 1st Uncle Jack and mum were married, the day before mum's birthday.
We moved to a bungalow and after a couple of years we all moved to Guisborough, Dad's home.
Mum and I loved this change although by this time I was at University.
Mum and Dad were both still working at ICI.
Dad had a very stressful job and in 1983 he suffered a massive heart attack.
It resulted in him having to stop work.
In those days ICI was one of the best emloyers, with very good benefits.
Both Dad and Mum left with "Golden Handshakes".
Mum decided to leave in order to ensure Dad had the rest he was to need.
Happy with their bungalow in Guisborough, they bought a static caravan at Rosedale Abbey.
They loved to visit and stay whenever they had the time.
Infact, the photograph above was indeed taken in the caravan, by mum.
On the morning of August 13th 1986, whilst staying at the caravan, Dad told mum he would prefer go home. He wasn't feeling very well.
They had planned on going to Egton Country Show, one of their all time favourites.
They packed up and set off for home. It would have been a very busy day on the roads.
Holiday traffic. The Whitby to Guisborough Road in particular!
As the car passed Gisborough Hall, Dad brought the car to a stop and slumped forward.He had died, literaly at the wheel.
I was teaching in Nottingham at the time.
I received the news later that afternoon and returned home the following day.
This was to be a turning point in my life. I was to return home and look after mum.
I had a fantastic relationship with Dad, he was indeed my Dad. Notice how he suddenly evolved as Dad from Uncle Jack? It was the same in our relationship.
I don't know when it happened, it just did. One day I just called him Dad!
Dad recounted the event to mum..he had cried at the time, privately, with pride and love.
I often sit in Dad's chair and remember him.

42 comments:
What a lovely tribute to Jack, your dad. He must have been an incredibly wonderful man.
I have no problem understanding your choice of J. There are not many of those around.
Denise, this is a great tribute to your dad and to your mum as well. I followed your example and told about my brave mum who kept us alive in the Japanese concentration camp. My "J" is Japanese concentration camps on Java. Not a nice subject eh?
What a fantastic story, a great tribute to a father. Lovely to meet your Jack Denise.
xoxo Tyra
What a wonderful tribune to your "real" Dad - the one who was there for you when you needed him.
XX
Isn't it wonderful that we can honour people long gone in this very personal way. Good old Jack!
A very nice tribute to someone who was very important in you life. Thank you for sharing.
What a wonderful story about your Dad. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Now who can beat that :) Wonderful narration maam.. truly loved the post as I love your initiative !! Way to go!!!
That poem from Keats just added to the charm :) Thank you for sharing such wonderful moments ... I started missing my dad who is back home in a different state :)
I love your tribute to Jack, your dad. Have a fun abc:)
I love your story of your dad - thanks for sharing it with us! :)
My J is up too!
Happy ABC!
How blest you and your mum were to have him in your life.
Wonderful story, Denise. And I love that poem. It's years since I read it. Incidentally, I used to teach in Nottingham at Berridge Road Junior School. I had digs at Premier Road across from the Goose Fair fairgrounds.
I always enjoy reading about your Dad, Jack. My Dad's name was Jack as well AND my sweetie's Dad's name was Jack too! What a great name!
Thanks for sharing; a wonderful tribute to Jack.
This is very personal. I feel I could be intruding through your mind. Lovely post again You share more than I could.
Indeed God has sent someone like Jack to you and your dear mum. Thanks for sharing such wonderful part of your life with us.
What a beautiful story, Denise. It broke my heart even though they enjoyed a wonderful life together. I don't want those stories to end like that.
What a beautiful story and lovely tribute.
An Arkies Musings
What a sweet tribute - and a lovely, warm story.
Wonderful story of yr beloved DAD.Sweet & warm story and tribute.
Have a nice day.
Hi Mrs. Nesbitt,
What a wonderful story about your dad!! Love that poem! Thanks for sharing your J -Jack story! Have a great day!!
Sherrie
Beautiful tribute to your father.
Have a wednesday full of joy!
A wonderful post, and a lovely tribute to your Dad. My grandfather was a John, known as Jack, too. Just reading that takes me back to my childhood and the warm, much loved, feeling of being with Nanny and Grandad.
I've always liked that poem. So evocative.
Denise....what a charming man he sounds like ...you are a very lucky girl to have had him in your life. I loved reading about him.
How beautifully you have written this tribute to your beloved Uncle/Dad. It is quite true is it not, that old saying "anyone can be a father, it takes someone special to be a dad".
CJ xx
A very touching and perfect post for J. Thanks for sharing Denise.
These are such touching memories. He sounds like such a wonderful person and a perfect dad.
A wonderful man Denise, and a lovely post.
I know that is a happy story really but it made me feel very tearful.
One of my sons is called Jack. I hope he turns out to be the kind of man your dad was.
I stopped by briefly before work this morning & loved the photo. Now I have teary eyes from your story. He was a really wonderful man and I am so glad your Dad came into your life.
I also won on Foinavon but not fifty quid
Such a sweet story. Your dad was a wonderful human, Denise.
Hullo!!! I like yor long posts they ar always a good reed an a small Bear likes to keep his grey matter tickold :@}
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Enjoyed reading about your dad Jack. Found it lovely that you actually remember which horse you put your money on. That must have been a great event!
And he was blessed with a child who'd grow up recognizing him as a light. Beautiful post, never get tired of reading this story. Sorry for being absent so often, I try to keep myself updated on my friends' blogs, but as I said before, when I'm at my home-to-be, it will be easier!
Kisses!
PS: Loved also the photos under the bridge! :o)
not blogging as much as you used too? Hope everything is OK with you.
Libby x
Have a nice weekend
:)
That was a lovely story about your dad (Jack), Denise. How blessed you and your Mum were to have him.
I too remember reciting Meg Merrilees at school , it made me sad as she had so little and yet was kind to others.
Di.x
The is such a beautiful rememberance of a man well loved. Thank you so much for sharing this special person.
Smiles
I feel now I know JACK thanks Sandy
Your tribute made me cry! Your dad was definately one of nature's gentlemen. I'm so glad he found you and your mum.
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